User blog comment:Peter Griffen Boy/The Man Behind The Enemy Lines Part III, Section II./@comment-70.64.214.124-20100713200156

This entire thing is terrible. The plot is atrocious, the grammar is horrendous and the melodramatic dialogue added with the fact you're making Bush the biggest freaking self-absorbed narcissist who's perfect in every way is a disgrace to literature and writing in general.

This is not good writing.