User blog comment:SSDGFCTCT9/Story (Mk.II)/@comment-1840523-20100710191752

right, my SHORT story is called Skies Above and follows a multi-national squadron of pilots aboard a US carrier. They are taking part in a mission to patrol the US's pacific coast, watching out for Mongol raiders who are attacking US assets in the Pacific

Is that fine, or do i need to change it?