User blog comment:TheAmazingBBP/Battlefield fanfic/@comment-28584497-20100919224118

Bit of advice, make a new paragraph when a new person is talking in a dialogue, make sure to use proper capitalization, and also make sure to use less passive voice. Yeah, I know the name of the site is stupid, but it does really good for explaining stuff in simple language. The other places are college-related and generally use really tough language that most people before 11th grade probably wouldn't completely understand.