User blog comment:TheAmazingBBP/Battlefield fanfic/@comment-28584497-20100919224118/@comment-28584497-20100919225636

You don't understand, do you? Even in fanfiction, there are certain ways you should write. It doesn't look like a book at all. General rules: Proper spelling and capitalization, starting a new paragraph during a dialogue. If you don't follow a similar set of guidelines, you will have difficulty trying to get anybody to read your fics for more than fifteen seconds.